My PhD proposal

My supervisor's comments (15 Jul 2010):

i. a short title is preferred

ii. certain parts of background of study should be excluded to other relevant parts

iii. problem statement should be more focussed especially on efficiency & productivity

iv. new key terms should be included

v. other parts: OK

My actions now:

i. amend the proposal

ii. search for new information especially on efficiency & productivity

iii. plan for a pilot study

iv. start writing a new chapter on development of banking in Malaysia.